Nubis Posted September 12, 2018 Report Share Posted September 12, 2018 A friend of mine made a song and I wanted to show song you all the song and hear your thoughts. ItsLego, Blocker, WolfLeader and 2 others like this Link to comment
WolfLeader Posted September 12, 2018 Report Share Posted September 12, 2018 I like it, pretty chill... could be in stellaris probably Nubis likes this Link to comment
TheCrestedPenguin Posted September 12, 2018 Report Share Posted September 12, 2018 Its almost like the music from Vsauce during the waiting period but in the mean time some fucker from minecraft came in and was like NO MORE DUN DUN DUNS and thats what came out of it. i don't like this type of music anyway but thats the vibe i'm getting. Way to many dun dun duns Buck, Nubis and Brendon Smith like this Link to comment
Sail Posted September 12, 2018 Report Share Posted September 12, 2018 Criticism? Nubis likes this Link to comment
Lucky Posted September 12, 2018 Report Share Posted September 12, 2018 Its kinda ok but i think there might be a little too much dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun Nubis likes this Link to comment
DJB Posted September 12, 2018 Report Share Posted September 12, 2018 (edited) Too much build up and not enough banger but there is definitely potential. Seems like an early on creation. Maybe with time and practice I see a banger one day. Sounds like a good type of music though, should keep it up and do more sounding like it. Kinda like a club / city 80s feel. Edited September 12, 2018 by Wop Nubis likes this Link to comment
Tyler Posted September 12, 2018 Report Share Posted September 12, 2018 (edited) The bass and drums should be less of a focus in the song imo. The melody needs to be a bit more prominent while still allowing the bass and drums to do their thing but right now the drums and bass kinda hog the spotlight most of the song. Also there needs to be a bit more of a distinction with the song, such as you have a intro, chorus, bridge, etc. The song kinda has an intro and then a chorus and then quickly ends i understand a bit of repetition in this kind of music will happen but usually some sort of transition phases are used to help cut that repetition down and really flesh out the song from a concept to a piece of music.Tell him to check out a bit more Chillstep style songs and listen to the chord progressions and the different transitions might help out a lot especially if he doesn't have any formal music education. @DarkKnight is really good with music but i dunno if he's into this kind of music though. Edited September 12, 2018 by Tyler Nubis likes this Link to comment
jeans Posted September 12, 2018 Report Share Posted September 12, 2018 6 hours ago, Metal said: A friend of mine made a song and I wanted to show song you all the song and hear your thoughts. haha, asking for a "friend" of course. Nubis likes this Link to comment
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