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_Peter

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  1. Just now, Sean That Irish Guy said:

    @bamf There is a bug right now, ive only seen it happen to two people in the gang other than me so far and soft logging or dc'ing doesnt fix it, where if i down someone it says that i have ran them over and i get a charge for it, 1k. Like today a bounty was lagging really bad and we could walk up to him and he didnt even notice us and downing rounds done nothing, then all of a sudden i got a 10k bounty and it said i ran him over 10 times and it just happened again after logging in but they got downed straight away. Also sometimes downing rounds will not work for a particular person but will for others.

    Edit: Also im seeing alot of bugged players ie. error: no unit

    I don't know if this is unrelated but two nights ago when the servers were getting attacked and lagging I logged off. I got back the next day and had a count of bounty hunter execution even though I didn't drop anyone?

  2. In-game name: Peter

    Age: 18

    Arma 3 hours (screenshot): 2170 https://gyazo.com/b0fc76dd1fe6fb6a87c8e9932908a1eb

    Location/Timezone: EST

    Past/Current Gangs: Independent Slayers

    Bank Balance: 1mil

    Do you have a working mic? Yes

    Why do you want to join Acheron ? Isamu told me too, had fun playing with you all

    What can you bring to Acheron ? Cartel experience, general knowledge from 3 years of playing, Rebel and BH

    Are there any current members who can vouch for you? Isamu, Berg

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  3. Just now, Sr_Sinful said:

    Layout is nice and all but from an English perspective it's not that great. You add a lot of unnecessary phrases, and when you report about something as factual as history you should avoid using the first person (then again this is a blog), but the former is the most egregious of the offenses. A couple of examples of this is when you say "The specific one I wanted to talk about today" or "Whichever side you choose to stand with." In fact, this whole sentence is irritating to read: "A majority would claim this was a pretty new development that came along with the 2016 US election, but many don't realize that this is false," because it can be condensed immensely. The reason those phrases/sentence are so annoying to read is because they don't add anything to the conversation. You can tell a phrase is useless if you remove it from the sentence and it still makes perfect sense, or it just flat out adds no value. 

    Sorry if I was too critical, but the English teacher in me couldn't help myself. Pretty well made though from a technical point of view. Other than all the English stuff, good job :)

     

    Thanks for the advice. I chose to use first person because I was going for a more informal blog post, but it's definitely something to consider.

    As far as some long, unnecessary sentences go, I will make sure to read through a tad bit more carefully next time. I tend to be a little too repetitive and wordy when I write. 

    Thanks for the advice!

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