Anyway, I didn't watch it earlier because I was at work when you quoted me and was busy.
If you want genuine feedback; here goes.
Don't use a long barrel on ANYONE. Especially not Ash.
Red Dot puts you at a disadvantage because no matter what FOV you're on it still takes up 80% of your screen when ADS'ed
Turn down your sensitivity because I can see clearly that you have issues controlling it.
Stop Hip firing.
Video Feedback
Fix the framerate issue you have, whether it's you, recording software, or editing issues; it's annoying af.
Stop putting clips of you getting 1 kill
Stop putting clips of you sitting in 1 spot and enemies walking into you.
There's a clip of you planting the bomb, walking away from it, turning around, and killing an enemy who is fighting your teammate. Clip ends. Stop that.
There's a clip of you pulsing a thatcher through a wall and almost whiffing on him point blank, then fighting a montagne for 30 seconds. Bad. Stop that.