this beat cool, needs more build up and some sort of change in the middle. Be intuitive and feel it! You don't have to follow the rules. Usually it takes a few years before one starts to break the rules and do their thing with what their art is ( personally mine is piano.)... Because at that point they would want to end them self if forced to follow the same pattern and rules over and over and over for the rest of their lives. But just keep making beats and putting them out eventually you will have so many and some are going to be fireee. On a whole different subject though if you wanted to become famous or for your beats to... You would have to find platforms like Goyney mentioned. Even social medias and stuff like that are a great place to push your stuff out there. Advertise and what not.